Nebel Ahoi!

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Nebel Ahoi!

Postby intactrods » Wed Dec 28, 2011 7:17 pm

need critique of pure reason and your experience create a sound about this track

http://soundcloud.com/intactrods/nebel-ahoi
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Re: Nebel Ahoi!

Postby SNM » Wed Dec 28, 2011 9:38 pm

It sounds good, my only suggestion is; it needs a beginning, you have a solid middle and end but .. tease it in a lil bit. Perhaps some humanistic elements in an intro like a nice vox sample or some kind of analog instrument melody to set the tone.
In the final mixdown for this, I would turn back the mids a tad and slightly bump the low end, but that is just a matter of opinion.
I Hope this criticism is constructive for you. And thank you for taking the time to share your endeavors [smile]
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Re: Nebel Ahoi!

Postby Vojeet » Thu Dec 29, 2011 9:36 am

Yep, definitely an intro would be nice and some high sounding pads, to loosen some parts in the track.
I just did get up to criticize the sound, but this track need some warmness.
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Re: Nebel Ahoi!

Postby intactrods » Thu Dec 29, 2011 6:33 pm

add litl pad at intro + spread stereo main synth + change some EQ
your opinions??

http://soundcloud.com/intactrods/nebel-ahoi
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Re: Nebel Ahoi!

Postby intactrods » Thu Dec 29, 2011 6:50 pm

almost forgot: i washed the dishes ... although i do not know how it affected the sound
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Re: Nebel Ahoi!

Postby SNM » Thu Dec 29, 2011 10:55 pm

Yeah I can definitely hear the difference, tune is heavy man I dig it [good]
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Re: Nebel Ahoi!

Postby intactrods » Sat Dec 31, 2011 4:13 pm

thanx. i am happy
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Re: Nebel Ahoi!

Postby Vojeet » Mon Jan 02, 2012 11:47 am

Me too, have left some comments on soundcloud. :)
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