War Child [Finished]

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War Child [Finished]

Postby Soundless Sonata » Sun Oct 02, 2011 12:00 am

http://soundcloud.com/soundless-sonata/war-child-unmastered/s-2Bzvk

I didnt make the full track public yet. Decided to share it with the [sitelogo] family first. [mik]
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Re: War Child

Postby SNM » Sun Oct 02, 2011 11:11 am

The first half of this is really really good Bro very IDMish and super quality. Im not so keen on the bass tones, but thats just my opinion. I would change em up, some of them kind of melt together.
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Re: War Child

Postby Soundless Sonata » Mon Oct 03, 2011 12:42 am

http://soundcloud.com/soundless-sonata/sets/war-child-bass-edits/s-tisrj

I need more pratice with bass.

Would one of these fit instead for the bass? Or keep trying, or just replace the bass with something lighter.
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Re: War Child

Postby SNM » Mon Oct 03, 2011 9:28 am

I enjoy the tone of no.3, but I also like the speed of the LFO on no.5. especially in the build up. no.3 gets my vote though. I think putting a little stereo space on the bass channel would be a good idea for this, give it a lil room to breath and set it apart from the drums and melody thus making it more of a focal point in the track. I have to admit, its definitely my favorite track of yours to date. [good]

What are you using to compose..?
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Re: War Child

Postby Alojzy Kowalczyk » Mon Oct 03, 2011 9:45 am

I think you should alternate between 3 or 4 different bass-synths just to give it some variation. And don't pan your bass sounds too much, it's confusing.
I think Bass No5 is a bit muddy, the rest is pretty sweet!
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Re: War Child

Postby Orca » Mon Oct 03, 2011 11:02 am

I dig the IDM vibes man [mik] . I think you have too much sub bass in the intro though. It makes the drop feel weak. If you wanna keep the bass at the same level, you'll have to throw in some very aggro mid to high end to grab my attention. I would suggest at least filtering out the low end of the bass until those pretty keys drop, otherwise the drop just feels like an anti-climatic hook.
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Re: War Child

Postby Soundless Sonata » Mon Oct 03, 2011 8:07 pm

SNM wrote:What are you using to compose..?


I'm using Ableton, but I use Cubase for mastering.
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Re: War Child

Postby Soundless Sonata » Tue Oct 04, 2011 3:08 am

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Re: War Child

Postby SNM » Tue Oct 04, 2011 9:00 am

Sounds like you got this one all sewed up [clapping]
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Re: War Child

Postby Alojzy Kowalczyk » Tue Oct 04, 2011 10:37 am

Fuckin' SWEEEEEET. I dig it!

Soundless Sonata wrote:V2 bass might be low.

V2 is the best. V3 is a bit overcompressed. But I don't give a fuck, both of 'em sound pretty damn good!
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