War Child [Finished]

[Soundless Sonata]

http://soundcloud.com/soundless-sonata/war-child-unmastered/s-2Bzvk

I didnt make the full track public yet. Decided to share it with the family first.

[SNM]

The first half of this is really really good Bro very IDMish and super quality. Im not so keen on the bass tones, but thats just my opinion. I would change em up, some of them kind of melt together.

[Soundless Sonata]

http://soundcloud.com/soundless-sonata/sets/war-child-bass-edits/s-tisrj

I need more pratice with bass.

Would one of these fit instead for the bass? Or keep trying, or just replace the bass with something lighter.

[SNM]

I enjoy the tone of no.3, but I also like the speed of the LFO on no.5. especially in the build up. no.3 gets my vote though. I think putting a little stereo space on the bass channel would be a good idea for this, give it a lil room to breath and set it apart from the drums and melody thus making it more of a focal point in the track. I have to admit, its definitely my favorite track of yours to date.

What are you using to compose..?

[Alojzy Kowalczyk]

I think you should alternate between 3 or 4 different bass-synths just to give it some variation. And don't pan your bass sounds too much, it's confusing.
I think Bass No5 is a bit muddy, the rest is pretty sweet!

[Orca]

I dig the IDM vibes man . I think you have too much sub bass in the intro though. It makes the drop feel weak. If you wanna keep the bass at the same level, you'll have to throw in some very aggro mid to high end to grab my attention. I would suggest at least filtering out the low end of the bass until those pretty keys drop, otherwise the drop just feels like an anti-climatic hook.

[Soundless Sonata]

What are you using to compose..?

I'm using Ableton, but I use Cubase for mastering.

[Soundless Sonata]

http://soundcloud.com/soundless-sonata/sets/war-child-v2-v3/s-Fp4KG

V2 bass might be low.

[SNM]

Sounds like you got this one all sewed up

[Alojzy Kowalczyk]

Fuckin' SWEEEEEET. I dig it!

V2 bass might be low.

V2 is the best. V3 is a bit overcompressed. But I don't give a fuck, both of 'em sound pretty damn good!